Dabbling with my companion of love
I lie there
A replenished young lover
Caught in the mysteries of a path called life
I find my way back to her, always
And that sets us apart.
Seeing her again over the horizon
I forsake all doubts, all shadows.
I run, run till i am close
I am lost again seeing her smile
A lone remainder of trust found
And love renewed.
I hug her,
The embrace exchanges our strength
We walk back into life, hand-in-hand.
I like this: I find my way back to her, always/And that sets us apart.
And I like that he portrays her as a hobby but clearly she is not.
Yes! she is his companion after all π
I agree with Kelly’s comment. It seems like he isn’t serious about her (he “dabbles”) but by the end it’s clear she means more to him.
We all forget ‘that someone’ who means a lot to us. And as time corrodes us we tend to neglect but when something happens all of a sudden you realize how much you loved them and how much they mean to you. Well that’s what happened with my guy π
Lovely work!
Thank you π π
Sweet!
Thank you! π
so romantic! makes me want to be 22 again………. (well, ALMOST)
best,
MOV
Haha! Thank you π
Like the vocabulary you choose to show young love – “dabble”, “mysteries of a path called life”. And the ending is sweet and worth it all. Thanks for linking up!
Thank you π
The embrace exchanges our strength…beautiful!
Thank you π
Very nice! I like how you said ,” I find my way back to her always.”. Reminds me of the story of how my fiance and I ended up together. Great job! I’m a romantic and this piece was very romantic. ::Thumbs up::
Wow!! so finally π THanks a lot!
π You’re welcome! I told you I would read your posts. That’s one so far and I look forward to reading more. π
You are welcome to π