Copyright – Björn Rudberg
“Dad this is for you”
“My heart beats like a string
Playing tunes with a wing
Love plays around
When silence makes sound
You taught me hard
Often singing a bard
Life was never beautiful
Drifting around playful
Thank you Dad , for everything
I can never be more grateful”
Tears rolled down the face of a proud dad hearing his son’s first song.
THINKERSCAP 
An intriguing piece – some of the rhymes seem quite childish and then other lines really sing. It makes it hard to age the kid, but I liked the father’s response.
The kid was small 😛 At least the kid in me wanted to do something childish 😀 Thank you 🙂
Aw, the last line nearly brought a tear to my eye. Nice poem.
Oh am sorry! but thank you 🙂
This is a dear idea of father and son love. Well done, Nadig.
Thank you 🙂
That is a very beautiful story, Nadig. Thank you for the smile on such a dreary day. 🙂
Well thats my pleasure , really 🙂
What a lovely way for a child to express love for his father.
janet
True. Thank you 🙂
Lovely poem to express a child’s love and appreciation for his father. Well done. 🙂
Thank you 😀
Dear Nadig,
Written with a child’s innocence and love for his father. Sweet.
shalom,
Rochelle
Dear Rochelle ,
Thank you so much. There’s a child in all of us.
Peace ,
Nadig
Dear Nadig, What a wonderful poem and song for your father – the love just pours off it. Lucky father and lucky son! You are such a talented, emotional writer which is such a plus! Thanks! Nan 🙂
Wow!! This made my day 🙂 Thank you so much Nan 🙂
This is lovely, very soft like gentle guitar music.
I’m getting in touch because you have previously posted on Trifecta. Thomas Marlowe and me are missing Trifecta and are trying to set up something that is similar, Light and Shade Challenge http://lightandshadechallenge.blogspot.co.uk/. It would be great if you felt able to come over, have a look and perhaps post. If you have any questions, please get it touch. It would be great to see you. LM x
Wow!! This is like a dream come true 😀 Believe me or no , i was hoping somebody would set up a challenge similar to Trifecta , i can’t wait to participate! 🙂 i will look into that ASAP. Thank you so much Lyssa and also it would be a pleasure if i can help you all in some way , do let me know 🙂
It seems we have a long way to go , looking forward to it!!