Change : Haiku

A motion in the making , change

You disappear in your appearance

Changing making and the maker.



7 thoughts on “Change : Haiku

  1. Hey! Saw your link!

    Evocative writing my man, but…that’s not a haiku.

    First line: 5 syllables.

    Second line: 7 syllables.

    Third line: 5 syllables again.

    Like this:

    On the throne I sit,
    Squeezing out my solid spite;
    The splashes amuse

  2. Hey!

    Great poem, beautiful and simply but, like the offensive playbook pointed out, it’s not a haiku. Looking forward to seeing some haiku’s and other poetry from you soon!

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