Gone ??

Tatters of an old emotion remains ,

Brings forth a disturbed dullness.

Cascades of memories flows ,

Leaving behind a moist tranquility.

A distant beat echoes from a far away place ,

Unending , jolting , excruciating ME.

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My response to Trifextra : Week 102. I sat at the blank screen , blank for a lot of time until i re-read the challenge a lot many times than i dare count. A surprisingly calm emotion swept past me , i knew how i would describe LOVE GONE WRONG. I knew how it felt , but to put it in words without the words that actually mattered and so necessary i was in fix. Those six words exactly described everything and all i had to do was to describe it.

The Challenge :

This week we’re asking for exactly 33 of your own words about love gone wrong. Β But we’re asking that you not use any of the following words:

love
sad
tears
wept
heart
pain

 

And so my response, describing the words exactly in the order given. I so love Trifecta! πŸ˜›

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26 thoughts on “Gone ??

  1. Very clever! You’ve got some really beautiful descriptions in there. There were a couple of points where your subject and verb don’t match up (“Tatters … remains,” “cascades … flows”). Easy fixes though. All in all a really great way to use the prompt.

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